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Smiling Eyes
Contributed by
Luinil
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:25:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Disproportion gushes erratically
Puppeteer teasing my expression
Eyes never smile
Fickle disposition sublevel
Ticking down to explosion
Stumbling blind
Naked to the world
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-25 21:25:04]
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Re: Smiling Eyes
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:36:28 PM AEST
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Oh - I like this! Short but strong nonetheless. I absolutely love the last two lines. I feel rather "naked" myself sometimes!
Well done!
SNM |
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Re: Smiling Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:37:56 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Smiling Eyes
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:33:47 AM AEST
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powerful and short
pixie xx |
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