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Alive to Die
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:00:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Alive to Die
Suicide lies
I've heard it before
Another lie to believe
I wanted to die
Because I couldn't go on
Nothing kept me here
Yet I still lived
For nothing more
Life lies
The truth hides
Deceit's on the rise
Life's worth declining
Nothing matters in life
Suicide lies
It's the easy way out
Or is it the deceit
That you believe
You have eternity to see
Which decision
You should have weighed
Which is worth more to thee
Death or life?
Life lies
To thee
Nothing matters
When it's all a lie
I strive for happiness
Only to reach
The depths of sadness
I strive for something
That doesn't last
Suicide lies
You might believe
That dying
Is the easy way out of life
Death can't be stopped
Your decision is final
To lose your life
Life lies to keep you alive
Death lies to make you die
You are alive to die
Life's on the line
Which lie to believe
Is my final question to thee
To live a life of lies or die
From what you believed?
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2004-06-25 21:00:23]
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Re: Alive to Die
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:39:11 PM AEST
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I really liked this one I dont know why you would say its your worse...I liked it a lot so pfft thats all that matters MY OPINION...lol well keep it up keep it coming...and sorry you feel this way...
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Re: Alive to Die
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:40:24 AM AEST
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great poem, I also can not see why you said it was one of your worst??
pixie xx |
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Re: Alive to Die
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:19:31 PM AEST
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I thought this was quite good and I really enjoyed the concept. Keep your writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Alive to Die
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:11:39 PM AEST
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| This is a diffrent stlye then what I see in you..But no not a bad piece hun..Suicide poem's cannot be done in to many diffrent ways..And most are done the same boring way..I like when I have read yours they are not the same ole same.. |
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