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A final goodbye to my love.
Contributed by
rainbowtearz
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:19:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No matter how many times I cut it feels the same.
I thought you loved me but I'm to blame
Because I didn't see the end in sight.
And I hold all my anguish inside because I don't want to fight.
You tell me you don't want to think about if it's wrong or right.
But if I took my life, maybe, just maybe, you might.
Perhaps if you didn't have me around you would miss me.
These unwanted feelings from you makes me cry until I can no longer see.
If you saw me at my funeral would you turn around and not look back?
Would you then believe that I needed you and cut me some slack?
You're too precious not to love and idolize.
Behind that perfect smile and those celestial eyes.
Would it take my death for you to even give me a chance?
All I want now is one last dance.
One last time to tell you I love you, but I can't go on this way.
A last kiss to make a better last day.
You try to push me to love somebody else and I fall apart.
Because you're the only one who has ever held my heart.
My eyes begin to well up with tears
I just want one last chance to whisper You are My Sunshine in your ears.
This heavy weight on my chest has not ceased.
Because you won't believe me until I'm deceased.
I can't think of another way to get through.
To say that I love and cherish you.
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rainbowtearz
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2004-06-25 20:19:34]
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Re: A final goodbye to my love.
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:57:32 PM AEST
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This is truly touching....A beautiful declaration of love....I hope you are given a second chance....
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Re: A final goodbye to my love.
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:16:49 PM AEST
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very emotional write. the power of love is sar reaching beyond all others. please understand that causing any harm to you will not bring true love from her for you. it would be better to let it happen if it is meant to be. forcing it will just bring destruction to you both.
hoping for the best,
the voice
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Re: A final goodbye to my love.
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by Trisha on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:41:46 PM AEST
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| This Is Very Beautiful. So You're A Lesbian Big Deal I Just Wanted See If I Am Bi. I Like Try Different Things Out. |
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Re: A final goodbye to my love.
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by pixie on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:49:41 AM AEST
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this is so touching. very sad............
takecare
pixie xx |
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