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A Summer Night
Contributed by
Justalady
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 07:30:36 PM in AEST
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As the breeze of summer rustles the leaves,
I stand transfigured, weak in the knees.
I watch as you walk and slowly glance my way,
I pray that I know the words you will say.
You've promised me violets, and stars in the night,
The moon heard your words, they sounded so right.
But tonight it is different, I've got love on my mind;
Please say that you love me, please treat me kind.
This place in the grass is where I want to lay,
The perfect place for me to hear the words you may say.
Brush my cheek gently, place your hand in my hair,
The breeze has now stopped...we're almost there.
Do you feel the warmth of this summer night?
We're all alone, we've only the moon to show light.
I'm waiting dear one.... the time now has come,
I need to know now, am I your only one?
Author: June E. Miller
5/1/2002
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Justalady
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Re: A Summer Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:07:41 PM AEST
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What a wonderful feeling of anticipation you portray,
Very well written,
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: A Summer Night
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by Kirby on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:01:38 PM AEST
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| Such sweet words. You can almost feel the breeze sitting infront of ur computer. I loved this poem. I don't know what else to say. Great write and keep em coming. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: A Summer Night
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by angelav on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:09:23 PM AEST
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| Really well done. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: A Summer Night
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by spooky on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:09:49 PM AEST
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| this one could be shared with someone,,as long as there true to you,,well written,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: A Summer Night
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by blueheart on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:25:15 PM AEST
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Wonderful words all put together.
Great write. :) |
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Re: A Summer Night
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:50:19 PM AEST
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| great write in enjoyed reading this i know the feelings......please read and comment on some of mine i'd love to hear what you think |
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