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The North
Contributed by
freespirit
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:47:42 PM in AEST
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THE NORTH
Winter has once again returned to the north
The lakes have become a solid sheet of frozen ice
Cold bitter winds blow
Snow covers the lake in a blanket white
As thousand of twinkling stars scatter the distance sky
The northern lights dance so gracefully
Than as quick as they appeared
They disappear into the darkness of the night
Icicles hang from the cabin roofs
Painted snow flakes upon the window pane
Each one so perfect and unique in every way
The beauty of this land is
Truly a piece of art
Painted by the hand of Master him self
Written by
Dorothy Calvert
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Re: The North
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:18:53 PM AEST
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The borders of Canada are beautiful, but I have always wanted to go to the interior and see the vastness of it. Maybe one day I will get to travel again and get to visit it. I do have friends in Saskatchewan that I hope someday to visit. I would love the weather. It is in the upper 90's here in North Texas and very miserable. Our hot weather is still to come later in the summer.
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Re: The North
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:58:56 PM AEST
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you have painted a lovely vision of Canada here. its very hot where i'm from so hot you can hardly breath at times i sure love the winter time, looks like i need to move to Canada or some other cold climate. other than morganton.great poem i truely enjoyed it as well. thanks for sharing this master-piece.
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Re: The North
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:28:09 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. Your use of inferance to draw to God as the creator is very inspiring. |
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Re: The North
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by backstreetdreamer on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:20:51 AM AEST
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| Hi Dorothy, Keith here, firstly to thank you for your kind comment of my work, and then to say that I think this work is beautiful, you could almost be there! Keep up the good work! (hugs received with gratitude!) |
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Re: The North
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:29:58 AM AEST
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What a great picture you have painted here with your beautiful words..... Great imagery...
Thank you for sharing this....
Jenni |
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Re: The North
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:20:42 PM AEST
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Nice picture of the north. alltho I cant stand the cold... I love your picture of it.
Great work
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