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i should try a little harder
Contributed by
nummies
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:22:52 PM in AEST
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I should try a little harder
A bit more effort from time to time
That aint the way its done in the movies
Just the same misleading lines
With a life the length of a piece of string
Who am I to tie the ends
The moon shines down upon us
Like a beam at the circus
If all we are doing is acting
Who writes the lines?
All we do is watch what we say
We never get across what we mean
To scared that the cross-fire between love and hate will interrupt the scene
I should really let the past fade away
But every time I see you it just comes back again
I guess I should leave this town
Go far away with the birds and the bees
You are like a fever
But I will get sick when it ends
If you knew the devil
You would bring him to his knees
All we do is watch what we say
We never get across what we mean
To scared that the cross-fire between love and hate will interrupt the scene
I should really let the past fade away
But every time I see you it just comes back again
I lye awake staring at the stars
You may have done the same
But when I try to contact you
You vanish in the rain
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2004-06-25 17:22:52]
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Re: i should try a little harder
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:31:32 PM AEST
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awww your names so cute, very nicely written poem, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: i should try a little harder
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:47:41 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..this is a lovely poem...well done.. Hope to see more soon..
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Re: i should try a little harder
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 04:19:34 PM AEST
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i agree with the other two poets this is a really good start to joining this site. good write.
love and hugs
gen xx |
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