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Lover of Mine
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:43:43 PM in AEST
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Lover of mine,
Your love so divine,
Follow my eyes,
To my heart's guide line.
Lover of mine,
Wipe away my tears,
Swallow my fears,
You make me define.
Lover of mine,
Forever us two,
Our future to pursue,
This ring is my sign.
Lover of mine,
Never let go,
I love you so,
You and me intertwine.
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2004-06-25 14:43:43]
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:12:25 PM AEST
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oh very sweet! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by RhythmBndt on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:19:49 PM AEST
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| Very good write :) Love the rhyme scheme. |
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:29:15 PM AEST
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| awwww nice |
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:29:15 PM AEST
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| awwww nice |
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:45:49 PM AEST
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This poem sure got me dreaming....Nice piece,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by Wolfareen on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:22:42 PM AEST
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| I said I'd look at your poems so ta da, I did. I like this one. It's sweet and simple and says just everything you'd need to. Great write. Wolfareen xx |
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Re: Lover of Mine
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 05:13:28 PM AEST
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Well, I can dream. My name is shared with the subject. Would that similar words ever be written for me .... excellent ....
Naz ~ |
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