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Colour of my eye
Contributed by
frejya
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:25:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The change of colour
In the colour of my eye
And on the fountains
That spurt me to high
It's overwhelming
An experience first time
And I'll live up to it
Till I know it's mine
And I cannot wait
To climb the staircase
And share this with you
With a thanks and embrace
But the eye colour, myself,
The change should be let
Out or close my eyes
And be kept a secret?
Copyright ©
frejya
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2004-06-25 13:25:34]
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Re: Colour of my eye
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by hooray_its_jen on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:22:38 PM AEST
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Vey beatiful write, I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks so much for sharing and keep up the great work.
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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Re: Colour of my eye
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:06:58 AM AEST
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THAT WAS PRETTY UNIQUE! WHAT A WAY YOU HAVE WITH WORDS!! ANOTHER GREAT ONE FREJYA!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Colour of my eye
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:34:56 AM AEST
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| Well rhymed..very beautiful poem..venkat |
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