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Emotions
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I never sleep anymore, Everything is a blur.
When I close my eyes I see your face, when I open them your never there.
I love you with all my heart ,but you put me through so much.
So much pain , So much love, So much hurt, So much care. Your always there for me you always have been.
When I cry my body aches, I feel like I want to die. Tears fill my eyes at night ,and at day I smile my fake smile.
They think i'm ok when theres so much pain inside. When my heart ,and my soul feel like there being played with.
Being torn apart from the inside out, losing all my senses. I love you , but I need you. Why are you never there when I cry.........
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Re: Emotions
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by frejya on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:35:06 PM AEST
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very well written
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Re: Emotions
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:44:45 PM AEST
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Well written.....sadly so....
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Re: Emotions
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:44:46 PM AEST
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Well written.....sadly so....
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Re: Emotions
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:15:35 PM AEST
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| this was good i liked it... has a lot of feeling. Poems always should have TONS of feeling. keep it up. Its really good. |
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