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heart box
Contributed by
dantoad
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Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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i wanna know who i am
what i deserve
my heart is a box with a rusted lock
it will be impossible to find the key
tell me who i am
make me be in love with you
and write mushy poems
and talk about the depth of your eyes
the scent of your hair
and how wonderful you kiss
i used to love love
i felt like i was flying when you would talk to me
but now...
now you see me and i could care less
now i kiss u and i want to spit it out
you touch me and i don't feel any fieworks
and people write about how wondeful everything is and i think
that maybe i should give up on love if it isn't fun,
until i find it
my true love...
it sounds so right, but is it wrong?
remember..oct 2002
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dantoad
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2002-10-21 10:45:00]
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Re: heart box
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:38:33 AM AEST
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| a great poem...your questions well be anserwed |
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Re: heart box
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by savannah on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:41:25 AM AEST
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| I identified with this poem so well! I really loved it! |
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Re: heart box
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:49:51 AM AEST
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I can relate to this. I'm always questioning and second-guessing myself. I've always wanted that wonderful, amazing, "perfect" love. Don't give up on love, but don't let it be everything you think about. When you find it, you'll know that it's right, and meant to be.
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Re: heart box
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by Lia on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:45:31 PM AEST
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| Ya know...an old rusty lock needs but only a good kick to release :) |
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Re: heart box
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 02:02:49 PM AEST
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Great poem....interesting questions.... hope you find your answers.. I used to ask the same..
Jenni |
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