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Angry Thundered Thoughts...
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:33:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Angry thundered thoughts.
No help and no support!
Stressful memories.
Pesky little fleas.
Fist of flaming hell,
Fresh blood stains, starting to smell.
One add one makes two.
More victims bruises turning blue.
You become what you are.
You see your-self as “ROCK HARD”.
Because old back away,
They don’t come near!
They’re scared of you!
They’re full of fear…
Then some hard nuts,
Get hold of your thread.
And it’s clear,
That they want you dead!
But you just give it,
All you’ve got.
Until you die,
‘Coz you’ve been shot!
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deathdrop
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2004-06-25 11:33:23]
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Re: Angry Thundered Thoughts...
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by apollo on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:37:45 AM AEST
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quite a rant i must say. this truly is angry at its finest. this was really compelling. a good write that is for sure.
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Re: Angry Thundered Thoughts...
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:13:20 PM AEST
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nice and dark, anger is good when expressed in poetry
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Re: Angry Thundered Thoughts...
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by Naughtygurl on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:33:47 PM AEST
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| ummmm...... weird...... |
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