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Cloud
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:40:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Thought too much to ever climb it
Looked too much to ever find it
Write my words so I can hear me
Not to ever make you fear me
I try to let it show, but how?
Un-sustained
Feel it all right now
I hold my breath and count to three
Then make a wish that none can dream
In the pixels words socialize
Then in time get un-recognized
I try to find my heart and mind
Be sustained
Feeling this right now
I try to let vibrations ring
Make up for time I've been missing
But I bite my tounge, fly away
Leave it there for the wind to say
Mama says that I'll never know
When it comes or when it goes
Strike down the child that lives in me
That's full of fear and plain crazy
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ThePumpkinKing
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2004-06-25 10:40:44]
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Re: Cloud
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by apollo on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:23:09 AM AEST
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this is really amazing. i like the flowing of this poem. you really thought this out well.
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Re: Cloud
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:14:48 PM AEST
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excellent poem!
well thought up and placed together.
the last verse really touched my heart.
i can't relate to it.
i just think that it's sad you have to live in pain and confusion, but to live with your mum being so hard on you, just touches me...i'm not sure how.
i really, really like this piece. it's very expressive. |
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Re: Cloud
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by Whisper on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:44:35 PM AEST
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Hey I hear ya... My mama said the same thing.
But thats why I write and share here with you. Keep writting good job.
Whisper |
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Re: Cloud
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:57:34 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, great write ev:) hugs n' love nessa
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