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broken
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:47:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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how can i take ur hand again
with these broken fingers
how can i love you again when these painful memories linger
how can i forgive you
when you never said sorry
why do you continue to haunt me
lies made me faulter
you made me think it made it better
lies hurt people close to me
but i thought it made them feel better
i love you no i dont
but its o.k i,m allowed to lie
like when i say i,m fine
reality really scares me
so i guess i better think up another lie
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Re: broken
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:16:22 AM AEST
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Forgiveness is not easy. Believe me I know that very well. Grip, this was a very well thought out and wonderfully written poem. I like how you kind of just let it flow. It gives it more emotion. But sometimes you do need a little structure. Although this one seems awesome as it is. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: broken
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:40:57 AM AEST
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this was really a great poem well done very true as slash said forgiveness isn't easy. i think we all know that from experience. i now i sure do. great job.
Brandy
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Re: broken
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by torn_skirt on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:38:08 PM AEST
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| i can relate so much to this. Good poem |
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