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Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:33:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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funny how loosin becomes a talent
and how lying becomes an addiction
like everytime u lie i feel as if i,m still alive
but really i,m dead inside
you,v lied for so long it feels like the truth
i,v hated you for all this time i dont think i can love you
i,v realised your not my only hope
with you i have none
funny how loosing your mind makes you realise the truth
silly how hating you makes me feel better
what hurts so much is i beleived that you loved me
that u brung me up because you wanted me
but hey life goes on so do i
i grew up
i bought myself up
i,m here your there i dnt care anymore you where never there
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2004-06-25 04:33:50]
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Re: never
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:12:34 AM AEST
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Well said Grip. Welcome to the site. I hope you find it as awesome as I do. This was a wonderfully written poem and I hope to see much much more from you. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: never
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:17:31 PM AEST
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| sometimes you love someone so much you dont see the "real person" they are. I feel the emotion here and I relate completly. good poem. A+++ |
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