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Brain Thoughts
Contributed by
staci
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:59:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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obsession controlled....mutilation untold
panicked beyond.....confusion strong
reaction within....a life lived of sin
outrageous demands.....flourished with strands
puzzled outspoken...promises broken
Hate unreal...pride cant feel
Are you looking for answers
that I couldn't find?
be sure to look forward and maybe behind
breath in breath out... a whisper or shout
negative thrives...unfortunate lives
repulsive intense...does this all make since?
Is this my brain?
Do I think like this?
must be something out there I missed...
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staci
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2004-06-25 00:59:04]
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Re: Brain Thoughts
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 02:08:28 AM AEST
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I thought this was cool, how you just let your pen and brain word together. It's crazy what goes on up there....I don't think I'll write a poem like this for a while...it may scare me! Nicely done. I liked the quick, random style.
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Re: Brain Thoughts
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:46:04 PM AEST
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Almost like watching a tennis match. Brilliantly done.
Laurie |
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