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do not steal the pain justt give me a better life

Contributed by Hearts on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I have hidden to much away
just yearning to be free
go alone on that lonely path
or discover that love burns in us all
we all want the emotions of a life
with nothin but love
do not turn around and walk away
not now not today
we have fallen too much
take back what belongs to the children
so they may hold it someday
we are giving too much
yet not enough
love confuses all
please dont let go
I would rather live
than give what I have
to the evil in this world
do not destroy me
help me work for our freedom
we are deserved to be forgivenevery man should know of this rule
tomorrow when I awke
I will try to have a good happy day or two
give up on me and I will lie in my grave
ask me to forgive
and move on
my hand is tired of the weakness I feel inside my head is the painful memories
lead me so I may lead another
every battle must be won with a loving nature
I will show myself the door
the one that I will have forever
may she belong to I think we all could use something w need
let us start a peace treaty in a days light



Copyright © Hearts ... [ 2004-06-24 23:37:04]
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Re: do not steal the pain justt give me a better life (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:40:30 PM AEST
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powerful. great write.




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