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Beautiful girl
Contributed by
betty
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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this once
beautiful girl,
now a legacy
of lies
cutting pieces of futures
from lives never lived
Oh! the power
to change destinies
the devil's gift
you posess.
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-06-24 22:57:57]
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Re: Beautiful girl
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:15:15 PM AEST
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| very interesting. |
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Re: Beautiful girl
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:16:58 AM AEST
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YOUR HEART IS THE TRUTH! LET THERE BE NO LIE ABOUT THAT!! IF YOUR HEART IS TRUE THEN YOU'VE GOT GOD TO SEND THE DEVIL BACK TO HELL!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Beautiful girl
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:48:02 AM AEST
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| interesting poem |
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Re: Beautiful girl
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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Betty this is a very profound write indeed!
I'm trying to relate........beautiful girl now a legacy........we all change through the years......but being a guest of the Devil?
Somehow I can't picture you that way!
Very enchanting and a wonderment of a write
Enjoyed it's possiblilties!
Poetic hugs
consue |
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