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When Love Ends
Contributed by
OysterMoon
on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I lay in the impression your body once made
in my bed and wonder how long the pillow
where you slept will remain warm. The volume of beautiful choices diminishes as I
realize I must now visit where our passions tower has fallen.
The silence only makes me hear you more as the dark weight of the hours drag behind
me. I must remember that inside the fallen
fruit the seed is not dead, as I realize what
used to be with, is now without.
Our bed burns of love no more as I wonder
with a jealous eye who will be tasting that
rich body of yours now. When will your
silhouette disappear from my vacant heart
as I seek to find out how long I will remain
a hope junkie.
The slam of the door doesn't abate my hunger for you while I've found my begging letter seems not to work. I no longer have any place to keep my memories as our mementos fall to the ground like autumn leaves.
For me living becomes a stranger as I cling to remembering what day it used to be. Every room I walk into is vacant as I desperately try to save myself from daggers drawn, quick to show my breathes revenge.
For now I must relinquish my soul, clear to see that when you left you administered the lash and I ended up "eating the bitter bread of banishment."
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OysterMoon
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2002-10-21 08:45:00]
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Re: When Love Ends
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 10:51:08 AM AEST
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Wow... this is deep!! Great Write OysterMoon!
(that's such a cool pen name!)
Daniela |
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Re: When Love Ends
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by viola on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:22:40 PM AEST
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| this is so good. it has so many emotions in it. |
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Re: When Love Ends
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by Lia on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:53:14 PM AEST
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| I must say that while reading this...my heart and mind was transported to a time when I felt love had left my life. It brought tears to my eyes as I remembered the emptiness I had felt inside. This is a magnificent poem... |
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Re: When Love Ends
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:11:08 AM AEST
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I liked it. This poem really paints a true picture. I give it a 4.31 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: When Love Ends
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by OysterMoon on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:12:55 AM AEST
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Thank you for the compliment.
blessings,
oyster moon |
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