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I Just Want To Die
Contributed by
Mistee
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Swirling in a bottomless pit
So black and cold,
The darkness beckons me
pain rages on
Despair all around me
Everyone gone.
Pain like a knife
All I do is cry!
Sinking deeper and deeper in a world of my own
Never hearing the door or the ringing telephone.
When will it stop
The pain I feel inside?
Just want to be alone
Just run and hide.
Can’t eat or sleep
Just swirling down
Tears falling
Echos, what a lonely sound.
If the sun comes up tomorrow
don’t matter to me
Darkness invades my life
It’s all I can see!
Shadows engulfing
my body like a shell
I just want to die
cause living is hell!
Can’t stop the demons raging inside of me
The swirling darkness will never set me free!
Blinds closed, doors locked,silence everywhere
Lost in the cold, dark pit unyeilding despair!
Screaming inside, the pain just goes on,
So much saddness than I’ve ever known.
Swirling, sinking can’t fight my way through
No way to survive, nothing I can do.
Copyright ©
Mistee
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2004-06-24 21:19:57]
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Re: I Just Want To Die
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:57:25 PM AEST
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| excellent write. it seemed you screaming at me fast with emotion. |
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Re: I Just Want To Die
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:12:34 PM AEST
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hey...sometimes things seem like they can't get any better...but you have to look past that. There is always a way...
i am sorry for your pain...
love and hope,
aileen |
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Re: I Just Want To Die
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:34:00 AM AEST
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great write.......very dark and very powerful
pixie xx |
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Re: I Just Want To Die
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by Whisper on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:11:56 PM AEST
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Wow thats pretty powerful. Your words tell of your pain and wanting of peace. Stay strong even at the most blackest of times God is with you.
Whisper |
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