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Touched
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:19:09 PM in AEST
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I think about you
And all that you've done
To change my view
With your soft spoken tongue.
Never before
Have I admired another
The way I do you,
My friend, my brother.
There is a part
Inside of my soul
That you've touched,
More than you'll know.
You give me a hope
That I never knew,
And slowly I mold
Into something new.
A woman of God,
Who is ran by desire
To serve the Lord
With an unsquelching fire.
If that weren't enough,
You sprinkle on more,
You showed me true love,
Now it is you I adore.
Yet, I will wait
As I've never before.
I'll wait for your love
For without it I'm poor.
I will keep quiet
And my passion concealed
Until it is time
For it to be revealed.
I cannot deny it
That distinctive pull,
The connection that brought you
Deep into my soul.
Heart to heart,
We whisper in peace,
Around the warm fire,
Amidst the strong trees.
Thank you for changing
Who I've become
By making me whole
Now to God I succumb.
Never stop living
Or loving to live.
Continue your faith,
And to God do all give.
Copyright ©
eatfresh22
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2004-06-24 21:19:09]
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Re: Touched
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by HellsLibrarian on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:31:14 PM AEST
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| Your faith is very apparent. So is your talent. Just one question, though- is unsquelching a word? |
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Re: Touched
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:46:59 PM AEST
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Wow... that's good, really good, Carrie. Thanks.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Touched
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:26:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful and touching... the picture of a true heart. I think he probably appreciates it...
Well done, meldë.
Namárië for now.
Andrew |
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Re: Touched
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:48:28 PM AEST
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| This a lovely poem, pure and sincere in its admirtation for your object of affection and reverence to God. Good job. |
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