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Changes for the Worst

Contributed by fastpitchqt on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:07:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

He was perfect in my eyes
Beautiful eyes, ever so green
Amazing, sparkling smile
Dimples that were so cute
Arms always open for me
Kisses so tender and sweet
Strong body that made me feel safe and secure
Careful with me and very gentle
Caring and loving holding me all night
Sweet and polite
A true gentleman
Perfect personality to compliment mine
Had a silly side and loved to play around

But somewhere along the road something happened
He changed and was no longer the man I used to know
It was as though he was a completely different person
He became more distant
The calls were shorter and less frequent
Til they stopped all together
He had new friends
He wasted all his savings on stupid stuff
Partied all the time, always drinking
A whole different guy began to surface
One I didn’t know, and didn’t want to know
He said hurtful things
He broke my heart and made me cry
Then we just stopped contact all together
It was as though he disappeared

I don’t know what brought about these horrible changes
But I want the old Justin back
The Justin I fell in love with and am still in love with
Don’t be a coward, and a follower
Be a man, a leader
The man you used to be
The man who I loved
Go back to the old you
How you used to be.

Copyright Â© fastpitchqt ... [ 2004-06-24 20:07:57]
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Re: Changes for the Worst (User Rating: 1 )
by KittyKat on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:07:58 PM AEST
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whos justin?
j/w don't b so picky!

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