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Dark Rain
Contributed by
Shadow
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:24:53 PM in AEST
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Silence fills the darkened street
Papers lie till wind they meet
An amber sky takes its shape
Casting down its red cape
Silence settles on the ground
The sweet wind carries not a sound
Black rain falls thick and fast
Like waste that god himself has cast
Alone again I take it in
Let it hit me like newfound sin
Naked like I’m just borne
The rain washes my skin so torn
Fresh blood fell
From my skin so pail
Blue eyes shine
No longer divine
Endless sin
No light shines in…….
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-06-24 19:24:53]
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Re: Dark Rain
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:33:14 PM AEST
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| very eerie and beautiful, good work* |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:26:14 PM AEST
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| Well done....I like the flow on this one. |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:05:58 PM AEST
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greatly written dark poem Shadow........*claps hands*
takecare
piixe xx |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:10:26 PM AEST
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great images and so well written, a sad though beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by imaginary on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:00:41 PM AEST
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| It painted me a picture, I could see everything you described. So pretty, i hope to read more of your things in the future. |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:30:34 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by Kie-Kie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:00:48 PM AEST
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It's an amazing write...sad but once again I can relate...I absolutly admire your work...
Love Always,
~Kie-Kie~ XOXO |
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Re: Dark Rain
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by veenu on
Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 02:02:30 AM AEST
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thats really best of u.........
i have not read it before if i would i will comment on its great
thanx for sharing such a pleasure |
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