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The Rain keeps Falling
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:59:51 PM in AEST
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Often I have wondered about the butterfly,
their beauty, their silence,
the way they fly, and pass thru yards and gardens,
so colorful, so magnificent,
maybe I wonder, they are the silent angels,
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ and the rain keeps falling,
Today I found myself, wiping tears from your daddy's eyes,
he has tried to hide the pain away,
oh' how life can change,
from happiness to full blown sorrow,
to grief beyond control,
to longing, to hurt, to heartache,
emptiness, to a huge void,
It hurts so bad,
my internal heart is crying beyond my control,
though I am out of tears to weep,
I feel like I've been emptied out,
and stuck in a cave only to die,
I 've struggled with this pain over and over,
somebody help this crying soul,
I feel like I've been washed in a washer and hung out to dry slowly,
I've struggled all day to help others and smile,
hiding the pain,
while my own heart is crushed,
my tears are bleeding,screaming, crying,
everyone tells me I'm so strong,
but I think death has finally taken its toll,
emptied out my soul,
this time, I am broken beyond repair,
(Oh God, I think I need an oil change)
and the rain keeps falling !
"Missing you " Ailie Anna Pearson 16 years old (March 2, 2001) ...... Jeremy Pearson 23 years old" (June 6, 2004 ) Always Loved Forever
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2004-06-24 18:59:51]
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:24:57 PM AEST
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very emotional write
pixie xx |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by angelav on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:55:02 PM AEST
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| The butterflies are so silent because they have no human trauma! So much feeling in your words. May you find strength. |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:58:10 PM AEST
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Val, honey, you have to let it out sometime. Strength has nothing to do with it. No one can lose someone they love and not feel the pain and need to grieve for the loss/losses. Let it go, flush it out and then be at peace because your angels are with God. Val, you know how to reach me.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:08:27 PM AEST
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((((valerie)))) this is so heartwrenching, so sad but even in your pian you make a beautifully loving poem, keep writing it out........ big hugs n' love you sis, nessa xxx...
@->>->:- |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:45:29 PM AEST
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When I read this I felt your pain! I cant find the words to comfort you but I will keep praying!
I can imagine this passing really did you in girl,You have the right to cry!Love ya Take care!
Christina |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:38:23 PM AEST
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| some interesting conections Between the butterfly and a oil change,, Great read... |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by RaineBurkhart on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 01:41:51 AM AEST
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God Val that was amazing as much as we talk and as much as i know how you feel i can really feel your pain!
~*RAINE*~ |
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Re: The Rain keeps Falling
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 11:08:03 AM AEST
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A heart wrenching write that took much courage. My heart aches to know you are in such pain.
Your writing is a wonderful release, keep writing, it has much beauty that many can identify with. Our thanks. |
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