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unthinkable love
Contributed by
dominique
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:53:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Somehow i've managed to
Look passed my damaged youth
I ate a piece of the tasty sky
Made the sun close its cycloptic eye.
I’ve done the unthinkable without thinking
Stared down love without blinking
I kissed my own reflection in an ocean
I danced with the grace of poetry’s motion
I jumped into fire and I didn’t burn
I taught myself with simplicity learned
Gambled with love and lost the bet
The unthinkable: it doesn’t hurt yet.
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dominique
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2004-06-24 18:53:54]
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Re: unthinkable love
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:26:06 PM AEST
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great write
pixie xx |
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Re: unthinkable love
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by angelav on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:57:29 PM AEST
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| Nicely paced, smoothly rhymed, I love the message. |
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