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Alone
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:31:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit here, in this room,
colours mixing on the walls,
next doors lights blind my windows.
On my own, alone, scared,
full of fear I grab a knife,
surrated edge, camoflage case,
not to sharp, but just enough.
I have fear of someone breaking in,
a man, coming in my house,
killing my guard dog,
taking me, what would happen?
I sit with this knife in my hand,
just incase, waiting for him.
I talk online, listen to music,
keep my mind occupied.
Still waiting for my dogs yelp.
Please! Come Back! Come Home!
I dont want to be alone.
Mom, Dad, I miss u,
I need you to help me through!
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Re: Alone
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by Thivanka on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:09:05 PM AEST
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| A nice presentation of the fears of adoselence, I sometimes get the very same feeling too. Good work again. |
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Re: Alone
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:23:13 PM AEST
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| reminds me of a few instances where i felt this. excellent write. except i didnt even have the security of a dog, only a stupid cat! |
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Re: Alone
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by moon_light on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 08:39:03 PM AEST
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| i know the fealing. being all alown can be scarry |
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