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No Comfort In My Own Body
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:13:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Weakness invading the body
I can feel my blood flowing through it
I don't like this feeling
I just sit still
I hate moving
My legs are weak
I want to be alone
But at the same time I don't
So uncomfortable in my own body
These feelings are making me ill
I sit and stare
Rock myself for comfort
Too weak and tired
I want to be myself again
And regain the comfort I once had in my body
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Re: No Comfort In My Own Body
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:49:04 PM AEST
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Wow.....I know exactly how u feel.......I go thru that a lot........I've been trying 2 write about the feeling but couldn't explain it but u sure found a way............this poem's great & pplz can relate what more can u ask 4 in a poem???
Great Job
~Kiela~ |
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Re: No Comfort In My Own Body
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by creed on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:44:45 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem alot. I've had that feeling alot of times. I still feel that way every now and then. I like this one! |
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Re: No Comfort In My Own Body
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by rugby_player on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:53:07 PM AEST
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from time to time i feel like this so i know exactly what your going through or were going through great job expressing your self
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Re: No Comfort In My Own Body
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by DeathByLove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:07:10 PM AEST
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| Wow I love this! It's such an inspiring poem! God your good! |
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Re: No Comfort In My Own Body
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:26:31 AM AEST
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| i know exactly how you feel: That feeling of no control over the body... Good expressions... |
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