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haiku
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:21:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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my poem was condensed
to something short and stupid
so instead i posted this.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2004-06-24 15:21:12]
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Re: haiku
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:39:36 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Nessa, but so short, stupid, nah" only part of a smile, take care Val |
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Re: haiku
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:48:16 PM AEST
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Awww . . . something stupid? Not if it was written by you :).
Nice haiku, heh, but I woulda liked to see the "condensed" poem . . .
--Nora |
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Re: haiku
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:10:37 PM AEST
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Hehe, made me smile too.
BS x |
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Re: haiku
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:25:37 PM AEST
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LOLOLOL, well, I like it!!!!
Smiles and huys, Nessa,
Rita |
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Re: haiku
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by Merry on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:27:57 PM AEST
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Oh sis you are wicked, heheheheeh
Hugs
Merry |
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Re: haiku
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by Angelic_Demon on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:11:23 PM AEST
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Lmao! roflmao...
Nice mom. |
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Re: haiku
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:22:41 PM AEST
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Well, now I finally know what a Haiku is, I can see the humour in this. I love it hun, well done.
Love you mom
Hugs 'n lots and lots of love
- Becca |
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Re: haiku
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by Shadow on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:27:58 PM AEST
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| LOL. That is good. |
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Re: haiku
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by angelav on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:28:18 PM AEST
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| Excellently haiku and excellently sarcastic. Fun. |
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Re: haiku
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:38:34 PM AEST
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lol you crack me up........ *hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: haiku
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:17:55 PM AEST
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You never write anything stupid Nessa.
I'm still getting the hang of haikus but I get the humour in this one.
:)) |
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Re: haiku
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by venkat on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:12:09 AM AEST
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| funny..its o.k friend..venkat |
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Re: haiku
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:45:08 AM AEST
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Ha ha! Really great senryu!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: haiku
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:14:49 PM AEST
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LMAO thinking....only our Nessa can get away with this..... Thanks for the smiles, hun...
Luv and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: haiku
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by silent on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:53:29 AM AEST
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Your haiku has such deep deep meaning :) Maybe not but it's bloody funny my friend.
Silent |
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Re: haiku
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:46:02 PM AEST
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Ha Ha Ha that was GREAT!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: haiku
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:18:22 PM AEST
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| Hehe This put a grin on my face Nessa. Thank you. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: haiku
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 11:18:25 AM AEST
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humour at its finest!
Johnny. |
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Re: haiku
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by allie_07 on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 03:08:11 PM AEST
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| hahahaha loved it |
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Re: haiku
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by colinb on
Thursday, 31st July 2014 @ 04:24:21 PM AEST
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| lol well done Nessa |
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