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Life
Contributed by
Fluffhead
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:10:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I've fallen to the earth.
And risen from my ashes.
My wings are staind black,
With death and desolation.
Blood seeps into the ground,
As I look around.
Men fall prey to deaths hand,
Women fall prey to gods tears.
The pillar of Life falls.
Day into night.
Trees into ash,
Rivers into dust.
All of life is at a hush.
Copyright ©
Fluffhead
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2004-06-24 15:10:53]
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Re: Life
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by Shadow on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:02:34 PM AEST
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| This was very morbid and i love morbid. Remember this just because you don't get comments doesn't mean people don't like it. Just means they don't know what to say. |
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Re: Life
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by NoahsARK on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:19:36 PM AEST
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| I like this poem because it makes you think about what is happening and I like that Good Job |
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Re: Life
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by jenny21614 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 07:31:57 AM AEST
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| I definitely like this poem. It has such a deep meaning, This is the kinda poetry I like to write myself, so its easy to relate to things of the same nature. Good job!! |
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