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Amusement Ride
Contributed by
Monkeybones99
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:01:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your love has been like an amusement ride
Or maybe like a train wreck and I've died.
First you love me from the bottom of your heart
Then you say you never wanted me form the start.
One mintue life with you is all coming up dasies
Then it's like being locked away with the crazies.
Happy,joyful all filled with warm feelings
Sad,mad clawing at the walls and celeings.
This little house a home when we're together
Then this insane ayslum locked away smothered.
I feel good inside when you whisper my name
Crazy when things go wrong and I'm the one you blame.
So now I must walk away from this house or home
Before I go insane crazy thinking I'm a nome.
Happiness replaced taken over by emptiness
Love turned off,consumed by lonliness.
Now all we were or could ever be
Has been put in a staright jacket and you have thrown away the key.
Copyright ©
Monkeybones99
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2004-06-24 14:01:50]
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Re: Amusement Ride
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by angelav on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:43:50 PM AEST
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| This poem was easy to read. The pacing was smooth, and the message was clear. |
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Re: Amusement Ride
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:57:39 PM AEST
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| excellent write to say the least =] |
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