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Falling Asleep
Contributed by
PunkRocker494
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:56:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Falling asleep
Where all my sadness
I can keep
Where all my dreams
Arent so bleek
Asleep
Where not a word
I can peep
Where I am empty
Not so deep
Where all my sorrows
I can weep
And all my visions
I may seek
Asleep
The only place
I am free
To be who I want to be
To see what I want to see
Where not a spyder will creep
But only when I sleep
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PunkRocker494
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2004-06-24 13:56:36]
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Re: Falling Asleep
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by Britty on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:02:27 PM AEST
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| this was good. peacful, not harmful, good job |
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Re: Falling Asleep
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by carmen_queasy on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:06:40 PM AEST
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| that was cool, i like that :) |
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Re: Falling Asleep
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:44:53 PM AEST
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| very good write. |
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