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Death Row
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:16:32 PM in AEST
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I have killed so many in my life,
My mum, my dad and even my loving wife,
I had to fulfil my hunger to kill,
I just had to see the blood spill.
They said they all wanted the best,
That I must take my tablets & rest,
They didn’t understand my mind,
To my needs they were blind.
They didn’t accept me for me,
Why couldn’t they just let me be,
I told them I didn’t need professional help,
There was nothing wrong with my mental health.
But behind my back they plotted,
So with murder I become besotted,
I had to stop them locking me away,
In my own little world I wanted to stay.
I swallowed their meds for years,
That stopped me feeling & stopped my tears,
But one day I didn’t take the meds,
All psychotic thoughts flowed back to my head.
So as I sit on death row,
The time ticks by so slow,
I see the faces of the one’s I killed,
For their murder I have been billed.
I am to be put to death by electric chair,
But little do they know that I don’t care,
When I am dead I will be with my loved one’s,
Mum and dad will be reunited with their loving son.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-24 12:16:32]
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Re: Death Row
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:22:58 PM AEST
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Well, I viewed this as dark poetry, just my strange mind I guess. If his mum and dad went to heaven I doubt seriously he will see them again. The River Styx for him I fear.
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Re: Death Row
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:34:44 PM AEST
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madness, pure madness....... lovely poem though!!!!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Death Row
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:17:46 PM AEST
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This was cool, i really enjoyed this.
Its different from your usual stuff.
(NOT TO SAY I DONT LIKE THE OTHER STUFF LOL)
:P
BS x 5/5 |
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Re: Death Row
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:16:41 PM AEST
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| yes i agree it's definitely dark, but also really creative and different. great work * |
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Re: Death Row
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by Shadow on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:32:34 PM AEST
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| Excellent! Love the dark stuff. My fav. to read. you brightened my day Pix. This is a masterpiece. This should see publication! |
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Re: Death Row
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:55:14 PM AEST
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ah the mind of a madman, just don't stay in his shoes!!!
well done pixie |
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Re: Death Row
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by venkat on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:49:52 AM AEST
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Very dark..you are in a terrible mood..pece love and joy be to you..venkat
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Re: Death Row
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by apollo on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:33:27 AM AEST
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the tragedy. the images aglore. i can see your mother and father and the innocents taken, i can see you and your expressions. the electric chair awaits you. this was so amazing i am blown away seriously pixie, this was just simply brilliance at its finest.
brandon |
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Re: Death Row
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by Trisha on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:25:12 PM AEST
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| Wow This ***** Is Very Deep. I Feel The Pain. |
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