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you and I
Contributed by
apollo
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:43:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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for every beautiful Yin
there is a tornadic Yang.
with exquisite color in gardens
there is wilted tragedy beneath your feet.
all good things are shadowed
by bad.
life is tainted
by death.
some can not see this.
this is not the blind.
this is you and I.
Copyright ©
apollo
... [
2004-06-24 11:43:44]
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Re: you and I
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by arden on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:00:05 PM AEST
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short and wonderfully amazing.
written so well, a very well thought out and deep poem.
i liked it.
keep it up.
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Re: you and I
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:18:35 PM AEST
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great write
pixie xx |
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Re: you and I
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:18:59 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: you and I
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:12:35 AM AEST
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very amazing poem i liked it. you did a very good job with this write.
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