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SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
Contributed by
venkat
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:47:22 AM in AEST
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Rhyme
When love is meditated upon it is
Like a waterfall brings forth bliss
If love is worshipped in the heart its
Rhyme can be heard in the universe!
Dance
Dance is blissful when dreams are realized
Dance is miserable if dreams are shattered
Dance is wonderful when hope sprouts alive
Dance is sorrowful when death puts a smile!
Love
Even now I can see love’s beautiful face
With twinkling eyes and naughty smiles
Which stole away my heart and ignited
The love fire that was never extinguished!
Change
Brings forth sunrise beautiful change of life
Brings forth sunset beautiful change of time
Birth and death both are naturally beautiful
But the desire of death by suicide is sorrowful!
Truth
Looking to God in wisdom mind doest glow
Looking into self in ignorance you will grow
And if you find His glimpse you will not fail
To catch the truth in the self, hid under a veil!
Myth
Gardens on the banks of the river Yamuna
Were the play grounds of Lord Sri Krishna
When sweet notes flowed from his divine flute
Nature was enthralled and cowherd lasses
In moon light gathered around him danced
In rapture as the onlooking gods wondered!
Poetry
Lightenings of glory burned in my skies
Splendors of insight rained on my chest
Rivers of thought flowed from my bliss
Birds of light took flight from my heart!
--o--
seven are from the poetic forum
"START WITH LAST WORD"
Copyright ©
venkat
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by SnowB on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:01:31 AM AEST
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Wonderful verse!....I especially liked the last verse "Poetry"...Brilliant piece..
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:07:36 AM AEST
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well done as always
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:16:52 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, Ven. I always enjoy reading you. Great words. |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:32:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful work. It is amazing how combining thoughts of several can culminate in such an exquisite piece of work.
Rita |
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:39:15 AM AEST
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Venkat... one day I hope to be able to write as well as you do...... great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:02:10 PM AEST
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Each verse is so beautiful and complete in itself.... Good work...
Jenni |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:28:06 PM AEST
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i love your style here, dear venkat, very delightful and refreshingly bright, the poem itself is beautiful and so well written, i agree on most everything you say, i like the rhyme, dance and poetry bits the best:) huggies n' love nessa
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:23:58 PM AEST
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| lovely piece. |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by HellsLibrarian on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:27:04 PM AEST
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| I feel kind of dense, because everybody else seems to get this poem, and I'm kinda lost. It really is ambiguous to me. And it doesn't flow right. But now that I'm done whining, thanks for giving me something to think about. |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by venkat on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:56:22 AM AEST
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HellsLibrarian..this is a bunch of seven different poems. they are the parts of a single
poem..need not be confused... venkat |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by venkat on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:05:13 AM AEST
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| sorry, they are not the parts of a single poem.. |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by BrandySwanson on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:16:19 AM AEST
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excellent job here i enjoyed it. great poem thanks for sharing this master-piece with us.
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:33:08 AM AEST
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Absolutely magnificent bliss here!
Greetz,
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:52:30 PM AEST
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this is awesome your words ring beautiful and true amidst hundreds of other poems that fall short. Awesome poem venkat. I absolutely loved it. I can't pick it out a favourite verse they are all equally amazing.
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:22:45 AM AEST
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This write shows your mighty wisdom.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:06:13 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a creative new style.
Again you captivate your audience. Lovely piece. |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:50:01 AM AEST
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great work. Beautifully constructed.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:50:21 AM AEST
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great work. Beautifully constructed.
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by kalika_vidya on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:41:59 AM AEST
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All the seven poems are perfectly brilliant..
love you dad :o) K |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 08:25:40 AM AEST
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| Venkat, you never cease to amaze me. Wonderful words my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:51:56 PM AEST
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| very poetically done. not many can compare with your ability. |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:56:24 AM AEST
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Dance is blissful when dreams are realized
Dance is miserable if dreams are shattered
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 01:01:36 AM AEST
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Ah, seven beautiful stars indeed. I see wisdom, beauty and inspiration interwoven into these. Very nicely done and thank you for a very enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: SEVEN BEAUTIFUL STARS
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by Ess3nc3 on
Wednesday, 11th March 2009 @ 12:46:04 PM AEST
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| This piece highlights a very unique style of writing. Very poetic and meaningful. Very well-written. Good job my friend, I'll make sure to Iook more into your poetry. |
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