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moon reflection
Contributed by
peace123
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Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
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Please take me now
to the roof_
Oh my Love
and...
Show me the sun
..in the moon
Please dont scold me ...
I have tried many times.
to look at the sun...
each time its brillance..
has blinded me
Oh but the moon, I could stare at,
forever, lost in awe
and reflection
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peace123
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2002-10-21 07:00:00]
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Re: moon reflection
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by Emmie74 on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 09:22:22 AM AEST
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I like it. Soft and true. I've felt like this a couple times myself.
~ Emmie |
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Re: moon reflection
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by Lia on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 02:04:13 PM AEST
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| I like this..but one question...who does the sun and moon represent??? |
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Re: moon reflection
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by peace123 on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 09:49:54 PM AEST
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thanks for your reply to my posting.
My writing is spiritual in nature..for me ,the Sun in this writing is the brilliance of God, the moon is God's light reflected in a teacher/guide. For another it could be love reflected in their loved ones.
Peace to you |
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Re: moon reflection
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 02:02:22 PM AEST
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| Thank you for clarifying that for me :) |
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