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MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:13:01 AM in AEST
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If I wrote a million wasted words tonight
On a billion different worthless plight
Would any of it matter when things
Leave me wondering what happiness brings.
On truth-less notions washed cardboard stare
Based off books never read by those who care
And the honest fabled liars tale
Causing humiliation where angels fell.
See a wingless bird in flight
Dance amongst the cloudless night
Dip and soar; trace the sky
And scream a lifeless lulliby.
To ask the questions of this life
Research philosophies and bury strife
Gain enough knowledge until you know
Beauty ends when winds cease to blow.
So, if I wrote the story of the world forever
Would words be my wings that take me to never
And drop me off on their way back to the Heavenly gate
So, I no longer have to wish on a star that won’t wait.
Copyright ©
xslashxprettyxskinx
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2004-06-24 03:13:01]
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:23:57 AM AEST
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oh lindsey, this is an exceptional poem, beautifully written and captivatingly wonderful, i really love this line," would words be my wings that take me to never", i always have that in a slightly different version in my head, if words had wings they could fly to you... the whole poem is smoothly flowing and ties together, i agree, its one of your best:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:40:19 AM AEST
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I too would have to say one of your best this was a captivating write lots of emotion flowing thorugh I like dthis line best
Dance amongst the cloudless night
Dip and soar; trace the sky
And scream a lifeless lulliby.
very beautiful I loved that line very much so...it was a brilliant piece of work...again your best I think...well keep it up keep it coming...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:57:12 AM AEST
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wow, .. this is great
pixie xx |
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:40:49 AM AEST
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Such deep reflection. If I could give you a 10 I would. In fact, I will, lol. ^^^^^^^^^^
This poem captures the thoughts of many many poets in time.
Love,
Rita |
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:11:04 AM AEST
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This is amazing Lindsey..
You've really hit the mark this time,
very, very deep, i guess you have been doing alot of soul searching.
This IS in my opinion the best i have read of yours.
Keep up the brilliant work, and thankyou for sharing. :) |
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:49:09 PM AEST
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It's not hard to see why you are proud of this; it's got everything going for it, both technically and emotionally. You've always been a great writer, but I think you've raised the bar with this one.
Flying into the sun,
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Re: MiLLioNS oF WaSTeD WoRDS
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:23:33 PM AEST
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Well, I told ya what I thought of it on msn, Lindsey, but it's so good I don't mind saying it again :).
This poem is absolutely, jaw-droppingly, poignantly, beautiful. The first line, and the "would words be my wings" line, are two of the best lines I've read, period, in quite some time.
Great job, hon.
--Nora |
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