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WHISPER
Contributed by
RobertKilpatrick
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:58:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sing a song of a whisper
A whispering sing-a-long,
I wished now that I’d kissed her
As we sang, that whispering song,
Play that tune, with a whisper
Missed her.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
RobertKilpatrick
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2004-06-24 01:58:26]
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Re: WHISPER
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:59:39 AM AEST
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powerful for a such a short write
pixie xx |
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Re: WHISPER
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:43:33 AM AEST
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A little longing hindsight. I like this piece. Welcome to our world, YPDC. You will find many nice caring people here. Enjoy!
Smiles
Rita |
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Re: WHISPER
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:50:25 AM AEST
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very pretty:) warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WHISPER
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by HellsLibrarian on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:13:10 PM AEST
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| I like this one. Nice and short, and it sounds kinda like a song. |
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