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My Moon
Contributed by
mckayla
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:02:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Moon, moon way up high,
Kiss me like you kiss the sky.
I love the way you shine so bright,
Through my window you're quite a sight.
Clouds, clouds go away,
You make my moon look so grey.
Ah! There you are peeking Through,
When I close my eyes I will dream of you.
Bye, bye for now my beautiful moon,
I will see you again very soon.
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2004-06-24 01:02:26]
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Re: My Moon
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:05:31 AM AEST
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Oh Mckayla dear.......this is an exceptional poem! I'm so glad I didn't miss this write.
Simplicity is beauty.......always remember that. You are writing for the pleasure or everyone else and if you compose a poem, then keep it simple, and understandable. This is a marvelous poem......I felt so comfortable while reading it!
I too love the moon!
And thank you again for your nice comment
on my poem too!
Poetic hugs..............and WELCOME TO YPDC
So nice to have you aboard......you're going to like the journey here......I'm sure!
Lovingcritters
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Re: My Moon
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:34:35 AM AEST
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| This made me smile and I like the imagery you used nice one |
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Re: My Moon
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 12:25:21 AM AEST
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lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Moon
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by venkat on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 11:34:42 PM AEST
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| lovely..venkat |
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