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help me or stop leading me to my grave
Contributed by
Hearts
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:16:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am slipping in and out of time
as fear holds me into a desparate feeling
can I be helped or am I just a lost soul
forever I have been asking who I am
only to lose every step I take
maybe this is not my fault
only I can determine the road I take
even though some want to hold me back
I am too weak to follow another mans way
why should I listen to the lies I hear
maybe they are actually right
and I cannot see what I am supposed to
will I ever know
I keep falling back
I still do not want to die
I just do not want to live how I am living
that very fine line separates my heart and mind
I wonder if the world has gone mad
or have I just gotten so lost
that I cannot find my way back
soon I hope I know what my reality is
even if it just takes falling deeply into a nightmare of tears
someone come and show me what I am not
so I may exist in this world of painful memories
or just take thee memories and replace them with needed love
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Hearts
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2004-06-23 23:16:00]
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Re: help me or stop leading me to my grave
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:19:28 PM AEST
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I wonder if the world has gone mad
or have I just gotten so lost
that I cannot find my way back
soon I hope I know what my reality is
even if it just takes falling deeply into a nightmare of tears
I liked the poem a lot those lines though they screamed truth and I liked that a lot you have talent just know that lol...keep up your writing and things will get better writing is a great form of therapy if you knwo how to use it and you sure know how...
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...
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Re: help me or stop leading me to my grave
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:30:38 AM AEST
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wow this is so emotional, made me feel very sad when i read this..... great job
pixie xx |
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