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inward eulogy
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:14:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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tendrils of frost
creep in 'round the edges
invading in silence
and spreading like madness
slivers of ice
in my pincushion heart
becoming a nail bomb
as it tears itself apart
(shards of numb winter
splinter through me
and the numb isn't so bad
once you forget the loss)
like a bird
or an ash
i'm flying from here
lost all that once kept me
and now i disappear
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-06-23 22:14:24]
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Re: inward eulogy
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:19:17 PM AEST
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Awesome write! I love the last stanza! Very nicely done.... I think I'm going to need to read some more of your work! Yes, definitely.
SNM
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Re: inward eulogy
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:27:09 PM AEST
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this poem really touched me deeply, read a second time even more slowly the feelings and words just captivated me.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: inward eulogy
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:45:23 PM AEST
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very succinct Roy, but the brevity of your poem does not take away from the over feeling of the poem... in fact I think it adds to it. Loved the images my friend.
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Re: inward eulogy
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:38:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful and very poignant words and extraordinary imagery.
Needs reflection and re-reading.
Beautifully penned Emy-stary!
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Love and peace
Elizabeth |
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