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A Hidden Face
Contributed by
DreamsOfDark
on
Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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I awoke that morning and death was kneeling by my side. He told me that I was his friend and in that day I would choose my fate. He wrapped his arms around me and just let me think. I could smell the age in his coat. His blade was sharp and close to me skin, I told him these things. He stripped off his robe and dropped the deathly tool, thats when he became the one I love. The face of a tender boy in love lurks behind that horrid mask. and a rouch gentler that the softest breeze. Then suddenly its 3am and he sneaks into his job again, and I am afraid of loosing him. So I swallow my fear and do what is necessary...to follow him...into the darkness.
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Re: A Hidden Face
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by pam on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 03:45:31 PM AEST
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wow. Honestly, I think that this write is amazing. I understand this feeling completely although perhaps in a somewhat different way. I guess we'll never know. Keep up the great writing!
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Re: A Hidden Face
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by SapphireAngel on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 01:44:33 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. I like it though, shows truth in pain. |
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Re: A Hidden Face
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by TundraHydra on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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| this is a poem that people can relate to and everyone needs a poem like that, plus I love this poet, shes a great person |
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Re: A Hidden Face
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
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| *Blushes* You flatter me far to much. |
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Re: A Hidden Face
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by Sk8er909 on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 05:00:47 PM AEST
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| I really like your poems this one the most.you are a very good poet |
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