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mortal parade
Contributed by
merry
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:32:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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less time stopped ticking
trees line the boulevard
cars rush by with headlights on
impersonal parade
passes by without a sound
steady splash of rain on glass
wrapped in religions gentle shawl
mumbled prayers by candlelight
driven by our mortal fears
life hangs in the balance
sweetened by the taste of tears
discontented life's affairs
seem less important moments
rendered speechless from here
coughing up remorse
chewing on insanity of being
more or less is never a question
anyone can answer without lying
pale face contorted with pain
renders me helpless in the face of god
with his hands of gold and eyes of steel
my lip bleeds persistently
in constant fear of losing you
less time forgets who we are
once we have gone
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-06-23 21:32:12]
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Re: mortal parade
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:35:08 PM AEST
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The big questions. The reality of us all.
More good stuff. Just LOVE what you do with words.
Stitch |
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Re: mortal parade
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by Sordida on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:06:07 PM AEST
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| I love the poem!! And i love your name hehe that's my real name spelled that way too no wonder i couldn't get it when i signed up. Awesome poem again |
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Re: mortal parade
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:37:59 PM AEST
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mmm... vivid and moving powerful poem, makes me feel very mortal lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: mortal parade
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:48:31 AM AEST
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great write
pixie xx |
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