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I've Broken an Angel
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I came to you
Into your room last night
And laid with you
In the soft moonlight
Which spilled in through your window
And onto your face
Onto your lips
Which I had to taste
But as I came near
You shed a single tear
Said, "Quit haunting my dreams."
And I said, "Baby, it's really me here."
But you didn't beleive
And you started to cry
So I took your sweet hand
And asked, "darling, why would I lie?"
The thing that kills me the most
Is that I hurt you so bad
You can't tell lie from reality
And you always seem sad
I did this to you
And I'm sorry for that, love
'Cause I've broken an angel
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:38:10 PM AEST
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innerbeautyqueen - i am fast becoming a huge fan of yours....
this is an incredibly beautiful poem - it makes me want to cry |
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by sunnyrainbows on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:49:30 PM AEST
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| hope u feel better soon! |
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:10:29 PM AEST
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| Loved it, Loved it, and Loved it, don't know where you had those beautiful words hidden, but thanks so much for sharing this genuine gem, truely fabulous, take care Val |
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:24:36 PM AEST
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you're truly a beautiful poet :) I love your style...
ACY |
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:31:30 PM AEST
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| awwww great write! this is very touching. I hope everything works out. amazing poem. A++++ |
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful heart you have! Christina |
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Re: I've Broken an Angel
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:56:34 AM AEST
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i have read a few of yours now and I am impressed you have great talent.....
pixie xx |
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