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~ A Fresh Start ~
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:25:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I guess it doesn’t show
So you think it’s not there
But you’ve wrenched a hole in my heart
And I don’t think it’s fair.
So glad you got away
And were able to leave this mess.
Hope you enjoyed your stay.
Couldn’t have underestimated you less.
I don’t understand how
You can avert your gaze
And step over the trampled pieces.
Oh yes, you never cease to amaze.
Did it liven your dreary existence
To move on and not look back?
How can you stand to look at yourself?
Does the mirror not show what you lack?
Does even a thought of us
Drift through that mind of yours?
Do you hope we are doing okay?
Did you ever wonder what was the cause?
Can you really put it all behind you
And start afresh again?
Can I ever forgive the past
Or has all of this life been in vain?
MW 17.11.02
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evilfairy
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2004-06-23 20:25:56]
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Re: ~ A Fresh Start ~
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:35:07 PM AEST
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| my roommate in college seems like was in the exact situation... it's not fair to you and i'm sorry you have to go through that. your wording is really excellent tho, the flow goes completely uninterrupted... great writing * |
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Re: ~ A Fresh Start ~
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:35:33 PM AEST
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ohhh very sad, beautifully expressed, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ~ A Fresh Start ~
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:47:47 PM AEST
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| aw! so sad :( very good |
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Re: ~ A Fresh Start ~
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:15:38 PM AEST
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| emotional and strong write. my father left me also, but i dont think he will ever come back. |
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