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Dark Fire
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:34:33 PM in AEST
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Flashes run across my mind,
Scorching my memory,
Like a never-ending fire.
I lower my head.
Tiny puddles form in my cupped hands,
Burning through the skin.
Shame filled tears,
Pouring from my poisoned eyes.
Those little memories,
The flashes of dark sparks,
Smouldering and blazing.
Terrorising me over and over.
Innocent little girl,
Blistered by the flare.
Dangerous wildfire warning her,
Flames lick by her hair.
Scared confused and lonely,
I sit and warm my face.
The fire and flashbacks,
Intertwine and melt,
Fused together by time
And the memories that are felt.
Taken back in time,
To that fiery day.
The day that would fade me.
The day that would break me.
The day that would imprint,
The smoking flames deep within.
Dissolving my feelings as I waste away.
Turning to ash and coals,
The remains from a fiery day.
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Re: Dark Fire
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:52:52 PM AEST
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| interesting. i think the question of what caused the fiery day is left unanswered. |
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Re: Dark Fire
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:24:09 PM AEST
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An intriguing write about fire.
The metaphors used were excellant. |
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Re: Dark Fire
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:01:48 AM AEST
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wow, this was great
pixie xx |
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Re: Dark Fire
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:33:58 AM AEST
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| Wow.. Im impressed x |
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Re: Dark Fire
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:33:58 AM AEST
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| Wow.. Im impressed x |
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Re: Dark Fire
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:03:21 PM AEST
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| hey now this is good.. good stuff |
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Re: Dark Fire
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by flamingblade on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:37:43 PM AEST
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i reallly l lilke this.lts a creative way of expressing yourself. keep writing.ill be looking for more of your poems.
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