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Because
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:41:22 PM in AEST
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because ...
you were there at the beginning
holding my hand
at the middle of my life crisis
at the edge of my death bed
kissing my hand
because you were the life i never had
iam now living through you
forever
and i know when your thinking about me
because i feel enredibly happy
so thats why iam so content every minute of the day
when you love me
which was and always will be
the best days of my life and death
i love you more than i did you mind
your inteligence
(my spelling!)
i may not be bright
but i know when the sun is shining for me
and it is definitly
shining,beaming down from heaven
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-23 16:41:22]
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Re: Because
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:48:26 PM AEST
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aww thats sweet and sad
good write
please comment on my work too if you want
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Re: Because
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:53:59 PM AEST
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What a beautiful, sweet, touching poem! I really enjoyed reading this one. The repetition of "because" quite added to this poem's power, and the spelling mistakes, since you actually called attention to them, don't detract at all. Great --very-- job!
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