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Death's Row
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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some one wake me
stir my soul
break me from this eternity
from this plastic life
so fake
as i bleed
apon the soft bed sheets
seeping into death row
calling for some one
some one to know
that as a day gose by
another gives way unknown
insanity simmers behind my eyelids
asi give it all away
into an eternity of sleep
cutting apart my wrists
and resisting life
bleeding into the white
comiting this long held suicide prayer
smile as i black out
my last breath i breath
slipping fast into death's row
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-06-23 16:41:18]
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Re: Death's Row
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:46:29 PM AEST
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that's very good, shows a lot of emotion
Please comment on my work
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Re: Death's Row
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by jillian_f006 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:54:45 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. It was good, very clear. read mine....
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Re: Death's Row
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:00:20 PM AEST
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:(
I'm sorry...I have a lot of problems with people being suicidal...especially since most of my friends have/had been at one point...including me.
touching poem
ACY |
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Re: Death's Row
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:19:14 PM AEST
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Great poem, though I have to say that I truly hope you hit the "safety net" before you hit death's row...
Jaime |
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Re: Death's Row
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:08:08 AM AEST
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very impressive write
pixie xx |
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