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Unsuicidal
Contributed by
Yodo
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:21:07 PM in AEST
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Were I of any greater constitution,
There'd be nothing left to see.
If I had any more bravado,
There'd be nothing left of me.
I say that I can do it,
And I tell you that I will.
And nomatter how hard I try
I can't seem to kill.
See, every day I say I'll die
But I just keep living.
Every day I will submit,
But I just keep on killing.
Copyright ©
Yodo
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2004-06-23 14:21:07]
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Re: Unsuicidal
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:41:41 PM AEST
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Hmm... an interesting theory... well thought out... plausable...
As for your poem, it's a good one... its funny how many people want to die, but fear the "next step" and so they go on killing the true essence of themselves inside for the rest of their lives...
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Re: Unsuicidal
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by JusMeOtay on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:25:00 PM AEST
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| Niiiiiiice write Yodo...they keep gettin' better and better. I like the line..."...every day I say I'll die, But I just keep on living." Great job! |
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Re: Unsuicidal
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 11:42:00 PM AEST
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interesting concept, i believe there is much truth here:) hugs n' love nessa
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