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sweet dreams
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:15:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
he writes me letters when hes away
happy things to brighten up my days,
what did i do to deserve being called;
beautiful little one,
i hope where ever he travels; on him
always shines the sun.
these letters he writes warm my heart
who is this man that wants to be part,
of life lived in mountain air where;
so far civilized world seems,
unlike misty mornings without a care
i write goodnight
sweet dreams.
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Re: sweet dreams
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:16:52 PM AEST
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awwwwww Nessa, this is lovely, you have such a way with words :):)
beautiful write
pixie xx |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:19:15 PM AEST
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Awwww . . . *smiles* a beautiful poem written by a beautiful person about a beautiful thing. Yeah, I think "beautiful" sums up this poem pretty well :P.
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Re: sweet dreams
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by SnowB on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:58:50 PM AEST
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He sounds wonderful ....I hope he fills your heart with warm fuzzies....beautiful piece...you have a lovely way of expressing your emotions...
Lena |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:56:54 PM AEST
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::::::::catches Nessa::::::: Well girlfriend, you were falling... what was I SUPPOSE to do???
Nessa, this is so sweet. Just keep the eyes in back of your head open too, ok???
((((((Nessa)))))))
Angel always...Joni :-) |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:20:15 PM AEST
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Nessa, charming piece of work. Analyze and it seems real, grab on and enjoy, lady! Life is too short to be alone for so long.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:43:45 PM AEST
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*seconds Rita* Mhmm I totally agree... with everything she said. I just had to throw that in there...
Nessmom, I'm so happy for you... I want you to know that... and I love you, Mother of my Soul...
Jaime |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:09:57 PM AEST
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enjoy the ride ...life is too short to not take in every wonderful moment
Shari |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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so warming tis beautiful
Michelle |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:44:16 PM AEST
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| knowing someones there is a beautiful thing,,a friend in words,, spooky |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:29:11 PM AEST
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| Very Catchy title Nessa, how sweet the dreams, loved the whole piece, have to sign out though tonight, a bad tornado on its way, Love ya Val |
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:40:27 PM AEST
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| A beautiful sweet peice! I loved this! Christina |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by KSUHO11 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:47:56 PM AEST
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That poem was very sweet, and thoughtful, I love the title, keep up the smashing work.
A.J. |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:19:47 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull.
luv huggs,
emy |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by venkat on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:28:26 AM AEST
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| awww ..very sweet..have a nice day..venkat |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:24:03 PM AEST
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Oh Ness...this warms my heart so....and makes me smile..... I am so happy for you...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:25:51 PM AEST
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| sweet writes come from beautiful souls like you. |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:32:13 PM AEST
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| Beautifully Heart felt. |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:38:29 AM AEST
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Once again a truly delighful write. You have created a lovely little picture of two souls entagled in their love and how bright it shines. Very nice indeed. Thanks for sharing.
Corinna |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:44:00 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is wonderful. Your words are very touching. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by Blackheart on
Wednesday, 9th July 2014 @ 07:20:17 AM AEST
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Elegantly painted. You pretty much make the person in this story feel even more lucky than he already is. This is also, if not especially, what I like to call Heart & Soul. Very Beautiful
Hugs & love,
Donavan |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by colinb on
Friday, 1st August 2014 @ 04:52:09 PM AEST
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| awwwww touches the heart |
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Re: sweet dreams
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:33:27 AM AEST
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This is sweet. :) As if it is a surprise you make someone's day...I hope your sentiments still remain for this friend.
Either way, beautiful write.
~Scorp |
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