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You could've been
Contributed by
ceci
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:37:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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We only shared four words
and they let me know
it was over
I wasn't the perfect lover
or the perfect liar
But you could've been less harsh
cause I would've been able to
forget about you easily
and forget all those lovely words
that came out of those lovely lips
I still remember the first time we talked
never thought you would be into
a younger girl than you
way younger
If you would've been less cold
I would've let you alone
Even though it seemed like it already
Now I need to know some more
I got so scared when I had to tell you the truth
I know I wasn't the only one shaking
you were too
but we said we wouldn't end it
and you left me with a tender hug
Leaving my heart open for you to fill it
but you decided not to
It is still open though
But its fill with sadness
and long nights crying about you
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ceci
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2004-06-23 12:37:00]
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Re: You could've been
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:39:49 PM AEST
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very, very powerful and emotional.
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Re: You could've been
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by Spenyacer on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:22:57 PM AEST
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::sigh:: we've all been there and you certainly know how it hurts... :(
i like it, nice work |
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Re: You could've been
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 06:46:39 AM AEST
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Sincerity and raw emotion is what makes this
work so well.
a very good write...
Star x x x |
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