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What I was trying to say
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I get scared sometimes
I like to be in control
And when I'm not
I get scared
I get lonely sometimes
When you're gone
And no one else is here
I get lonely
I get panicked sometimes
I have a burning desire to get gone
And when I wake up in the same place
I get panicked
I get tired sometimes
I go through my paces
And when they never change
I get tired
I get lost sometimes
I doubt myself
And when you don't guide me
I get lost
Copyright ©
Savannah
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2002-10-20 10:30:00]
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Re: What I was trying to say
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 08:59:41 AM AEST
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I can't pin point what it is about this, but I really really like this. I often feel that way! Nice write
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Re: What I was trying to say
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by Arwen on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:28:44 AM AEST
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| Haven't a clue how to explain my thoughts right now, but i know wot u meant here...i often feel that way. It's not something tangible, just a feeling of missing something or some1, of not being in control, totally irrational state of being, lovely poem honey. Keep up the impressive work :) |
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